Overall, my essay has not changed very much. I have modified some word choice issues, fixed some grammar, and rectified a bit of punctuation, but my concrete details and commentary remains the same. Assuming all of the others are also unchanged, we shouldn't have too much work to do on Monday.
Do you think we need to fix up the conclusion? I checked over it again and it looks like it needs to flow a bit better, possibly by adding more transitions. Also, I'm not entirely sure whether one of my concrete details is correctly embedded, as I am unsure how to include dialogue from multiple characters when the source material is a script. Is it all right to just put a set of quotes around each and transition or does that count as two concrete details?
Thanks,
Sherwin
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